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Submitted: January 2, 2012
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Alone - page 1by ~Yuki-Orin

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Okay... I started my new comic "MLP: FIM", which called "Alone"
This comic is alternate ending of one episode ''Mysterious Mare Do Well". As you understand, comic tells about Rainbow Dash.
I just thik about that episode... poor Dash. In that episode she was a jerk! And her friends trick her like that... well, I won't go forward. You'll see Dash's feeligs in next pages ^^
I'm still draw MLP not closely to canon... but I hope that you like it ^////^
And sorry about my awful english

P.S. - thanks so much to

for the help in the creation of this story ^^
And espesially thanks to

for the corrections of english sentences ^^

Rainbow cries?! 0w0
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my little pony friendship is magic - Lauren Faust and Hasbro

~~fear 0 0~~

~ValiantPlayer 2 days ago Hobbyist Filmographer

I hate the actual episode, it just felt so freaking dirty and wrong. This comic (I read the entire thing) is far, far better than the writer of that episode could ever dream of. I think the reason why the episode is so messed up is because the writer is stuck in the 90's, she worked on cartoons which are very different from MLP's dynamic, such as Rocko's Modern Life where the type of things that happened in the Mare Do Well episode are alright, because they were meant to be a comedy. MLP FiM is not meant to be a 100% full fledged comedy.

~TobiIsABunny Jan 19, 2013 Hobbyist Artist

Does it also hurt the argument of not being a bragger with Fluttershy doing the fly-by as mare do well.

~Goblin-Time Oct 23, 2012

Intriguing storyline...

~TobiIsABunny Oct 14, 2012 Hobbyist Artist

I didn't like that episode either. And this is how this episode would have ended in my head but less sad and Rainbow dash realized that they should have just talked to her instead of doing this.They should have talked and reason with her instead of pulling off this hero charade in the first place.If they talked and reasoned first and if that did not work then this would have been justified.Except that did not happened and they went behind her back.And not to add to injury they were not teaching what they were preaching.What I mean in this whole thing was to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson in humility of being a real hero and not to brag about your accomplishments except there motivations were not hero like and they were bragging about Mare Do Well's aka there own accomplishments for no reason other than to crush Rainbow Dash's pride and this is called being a hypocrite.